Friday, November 27, 2020

LOGAN'S RUN (1976) - Part 2

Directed by Michael Anderson. Written by David Zelag Goodman
Starring Michael York, Louis Jourdan, Jenny Agutter, Peter Ustinov
1976, 119 minutes, Color, Rated PG, 2.35:1
Warner Home Video, released 2016

 Deleted Scenes


Most movies film more scenes that are used in the film.  The process to determine which scenes should stay and which should go can depend on several factors.  Generally, scenes are removed in the process of tightening a story or to keep the running time down.   Sometimes the scenes that are removed can drastically alter the original intent of the film, and it is not always clear in the thick of things what should stay or go.  After the fact, it is often hard for the audience member to know what was shot.  Screenplays exist, but without access to shooting logs, it is hard to know what may or may not have been actually shot.

LOGAN'S RUN was previewed several times and fortunately, someone made audio recordings during one of the previews, so we have a very good idea of what was actually shot.  By comparing the audio recordings to the final film we also have good insight into what was removed. 

Most of what was removed seems to have been removed to make the film shorter.  There are two notable exceptions to this which I will discuss in a bit.  For the material removed for time, the film is largely better for it.  Much of the material is early in the film, and while there is some interesting detail in the deleted material, it makes sense to get the story going as quickly as possible.

A note on the script excerpts used below:  The screenplay is dated 1975 and is credited to David Zelag Goodman.  I am using a version found on the internet.  It matches the printed copy of the script that I have.  I am reasonably certain that this is the same version that I shared on the internet back around 1995 or so.  That version I scanned in manually and proofread.

Scenes:

In the opening moments of the film, we see a maze car traveling through the city.  This is the maze car mentioned above.  While not specified in the script I am referencing below, the sandman is Francis.  The crystal that fills the screen at the end fades into the crystal of the infant in the nursery.  This scene was probably removed due to its similarity with the runner chase after Carrousel, but it's too bad it was removed because it shows the crowd cheering after Francis kills the runner.  This is something not otherwise hinted at in the finished film.  Brief snippets of this scene can be glimpsed in the film's trailer.



FADE IN:

BEFORE AND DURING TITLES

EXT. SKY NIGHT

The moon and stars are visible, but as CAMERA looks down, the SCREEN fills with dark, billowing clouds. CAMERA moves into the clouds and just as they blank out the SCREEN, a distant shimmer of light becomes visible. Moving toward it, the shimmer becomes

EXT. DOME OF GLASS - NIGHT

A glowing but not transparent structure stretching off into the clouds that press it. CAMERA continues to move in until the detailed structural webbing of the dome fills the SCREEN and then CAMERA MOVES THROUGH IT and we see

EXT. THE CITY - DAY

Shining below the dome (which we now see as a series of dome-like structures standing off without end) -- a marvelous crystalline city of great openness, building clusters, green plazas, fountains... multi-leveled but human scale, crisscrossed by the flickering clear tubes of the MAZE-CARS.

CLOSER ANGLE - ROOFTOPS

As a MAZE-CAR slides softly to a stop.

ROOFTOP - THE RUNNER

The hatch opens and a MAN in a hurry leaves the maze-car and runs swiftly along the rooftop and disappears into an open elevator which instantly starts to descend.

INT. RESIDENCE PLAZA - THE ELEVATOR

From a busy courtyard below we watch the elevator slide down from a great height. As it reaches the courtyard the RUNNER darts out, pushes into the crowd.

WITH THE RUNNER

As he reappears around a corner, skirts a brimming pool and makes for a kind of broad corridor which seems to lead out of the courtyard. He is moving even faster now, glancing  back as if he fears pursuit.

ANOTHER ANGLE - CORRIDOR

Above, at the railing of an oval light well, dressed in black and silver, a figure holding an odd looking weapon lazily in one hand -- and watching. It is FRANCIS.

WITH THE RUNNER

Moving rapidly down the corridor, he suddenly stops as if feeling the presence above. He looks up, sees the SANDMAN and his face breaks in terror. He wheels, frantic, screaming, runs back into the hall.

THE SANDMAN (FRANCIS)

Vaulting the rail, dropping lightly to ground level, weapon poised.

POV

The crowd melting, parting to reveal the Runner backed against the pool. People are YELLING, shaking their fists, terribly excited and fearful.

THE SANDMAN

Emotionless. Aims. Fires.

THE RUNNER - CLOSE

Seeming to burst aflame in the LENS, then slipping BELOW FRAME to reveal Francis sauntering forward, holstering his weapon. The crowd closing in behind him, applauding, congratulating him.

THE SANDMAN

Arriving at the pool where the body lies, half immersed. He leans over, lifts the right hand from the water, revealing a palm with a black flower-crystal shape in it. He lets the hand fall back now as the crowd CHEERS and APPLAUDS him.

EXTREME CLOSEUP - HAND - IN THE WATER - (INSERT)

Closing in until the crystal fills the SCREEN.

Some dialogue was also removed during the sequence where Logan and Francis walk to Carrousel.  If you look closely you can see that they are talking.  This dialogue is interesting as it gives more context for a society where everyone knows that they are going to die at thirty.  Again, because the film explains so little any extra bit of context helps.

FULL SHOT - ARCADE GREAT HALL

An immense room into which the streams of people coming from the entertainment area are mingling. There is a general air of anticipation stirring the crowd as CAMERA singles out Logan and Francis entering, waving to friends. CAMERA closes in on them just as they reach a beautiful woman who is obviously pleased to see Francis. They embrace, and as they break:

FRANCIS
And that's my friend, Logan.  
(as she acknowledges the introduction)
We're celebrating his next in line. Carousel -- Arcade -- who knows? Want to come along?

WOMAN
(smiles, shakes her head)
Only if I make it to the top of Carousel.
(she holds up her hand)
Thirty -- and the big spin.

In her palm the crystal blinks, red, black. Francis nods, gives her a half-squeeze.

FRANCIS
You're thirty -- already? I always thought I was older than you --
(beat)
Well, give it a good try.

WOMAN
(pleasantly)
You know I always have.

Another beautiful WOMAN joins them.
2ND WOMAN
(to the first)
Sorry I won't be at Carousel tonight. It's my Love-Shop turn.

 

WOMAN
That's all right. Happy turn.

 

2ND WOMAN
You'll renew. I've got a feeling.

 

WOMAN 
(smiles)
So do I... but if I don't at least I'll have the ultimate thrill. I'd almost rather have that than renew.

 

2ND WOMAN
I feel the same way. Sometimes I think I'm not even going to try and renew when my time comes. But -- that's three years away. So long.

The 2nd Woman walks away.

FRANCIS
(after a beat; to first Woman)
It's been nice.

 

WOMAN
Um-huh.

They look briefly and then she turns away. Francis takes Logan's arm and they move off.

FRANCIS
I guess you never had her?

Logan shakes his head.

FRANCIS
You missed something special.

 

LOGAN
Well... you can't have them all.

 

LOGAN AND FRANCIS
(together, it's an old joke)
But you can try.

They laugh, but the laughter is broken as a trio of youngsters, moving with erratic speed of lightning, smashes between them, almost knocking Francis over. He reels, Logan catches him and they recover in time to see the trio rip wildly through the crowd, knocking people down, screaming with shrill joy as they disappear.
FRANCIS
The damned Yellows are getting out of hand. Those three ought to be in Cathedral. No business scrambling in Arcade...

 

LOGAN
(laughs cuffs Francis' arm)
What an old, old man you're getting to be, Francis. Weren't you ever a Yellow? I bet you were even wilder than --
(he breaks off as the lights in the Great Hall dim)
come on, Sandman.

The two of them start to move to the far end of the Great Hall.
Logan befriends Jessica because he thinks she can help him get to Sanctuary.  There were two scenes between Jessica and her friends where they decide to kill Logan because they can't risk that he's still working for the system...which he is, so their instincts were spot on.  Likely this material was deleted because it helped set up additional conflict that doesn't pay off.  Jessica's friends ultimately have no bearing on what Logan ends up doing and are dropped after the Arcade sequence.

EXT. RESTAURANT - FULL ANGLE - THE THREE MEN, WOMAN AND JESSICA

Eating without enthusiasm... obviously more interested in their conversation.

SECOND MAN
He's blinking... so what? Sandmen get old, too.

 

FIRST MAN
But what if he's telling the truth?

 

THIRD MAN
I say no. It's not worth the risk.

 

WOMAN
I absolutely agree. He's killed Runners for a decade. He has no feelings.

 

JESSICA
He was born a Sandman. He had no choice.

 

WOMAN
Neither do we.

EXT. RESTAURANT - THREE MEN A WOMAN AND JESSICA

Leaning together talking in an undertone

SECOND MAN
(urgently)
If he believes you, he'll come.

 

JESSICA
Why Arcade Station?

 

SECOND MAN
(impatiently)
Why? It's our only chance -- kill him and get away in the crowd heading for the evening slaughter --

JESSICA
Right at the station itself?

 

MAN
No -- just there -- on the first level.
(beat)
Don't look for us. We'll see you.

 

WOMAN
(cutting in)
You don't seem quite sure, Jessica.
(beat)
Can you do it? Will you?

Slowly, Jessica nods.

THIRD MAN
Tonight?

 

JESSICA
(stalling)
Y-yes... if I can find him.

 

WOMAN
I think you can. Don't you?

Jessica faces her squarely, nods. The woman looks deeply into her eyes, relaxes.

WOMAN
I'm sorry. We all are. But he has heard about Sanctuary -- and that makes him dangerous to all of us.

After murmurs of agreement:

SECOND MAN
(staring at Jessica)
We're counting on you.

Jessica exits. They look at each other in dismay. After a moment, one of the men follows her. They don't trust her.

Later, a brief conversation between Logan and Jessica was removed while they travel in a maze car to Arcade.  Again, regrettable because it gives a little more context for their society, as well as insight into Jessica.
They enter the car which instantly moves off. As it passes, the men in ambush come forward and read the destination. They ring for another car which pulls in immediately.

ANOTHER ANGLE

As the two jam into the maze-car which rockets off in pursuit...

INT - MAZE-CAR - LOGAN AND JESSICA - MOVING SHOT
LOGAN
Have you ever been through Cathedral?

Jessica shakes her head.
LOGAN
They're like beasts. Wild.

 

JESSICA
Maybe they're angry because they're grown in meccano-breeders.

 

LOGAN
(interrupting, grimacing)
Instead of what? Nine months inside a woman:
(ugh)
We're all raised the same but most of us don't become cubs in Cathedral.

 

JESSICA
Some people say children need human mothering.

 

LOGAN
Insane. Nurseries are better than any mother could be.

 

JESSICA
I'm only telling you what I've heard...
(slightest beat)
Haven't you ever wondered what your seed-mother was Like...?

 

LOGAN
Uh-uh.

 

JESSICA
I have.

 

LOGAN
(after a beat)
When did you begin to question Lastday?

 

JESSICA
I don't remember exactly... except I was a Green.
(another beat)
What would you like to relive, Logan?

 

LOGAN
(smiling)
Let's see -- how long has it been?

As Jessica turns her head... looking somewhat guilty, the maze-car slides to a stop.
The scene with the cubs in Arcade was shortened.  Material in bold was deleted from the final film.
Suddenly, from everywhere out of the shadows, a pack of snarling Cubs materializes -- moving with blinding speed. At their appearance the Runner whirls and races off into the dark shadows. Logan makes a futile gesture after her, then turns to face the Cubs.

A strutting, feral-faced fourteen or fifteen year old heads the pack, dressed in fierce-looking tatters and hung with rip-off trophies. He gestures to one of his followers to stand still.
BILLY
(speaking of the Runner)
Don't worry about her. We'll have that one later. Right now I think we've got a Runner and his pairup. And what a Runner!

The CAMERA PANS the other Cubs... mean, filthy.

A VOICE
We're going to have ourselves a time, we are. Right, Billy?!

There is a chilling laughter of agreement from the rest.
LOGAN
I'm a Sandman!

 

BILLY
I cut up a Sandman yesterday. They said I'd never get him... but I cut him up good, I did.

 

LOGAN
(firm tone)
I feel sorry for you, boy!

Some murmuring as the pack watches their leader.
BILLY
For me? Better feel sorry for yourself, Sandman!
LOGAN
No, for you! How old are you, Billy?

Billy is silent.
LOGAN
Fourteen? Fifteen? Your days are running out. How long can you last? A year. Six months?
(he points to the yellow flower in Billy's palm)
What happens when you're sixteen and you go green?

 

BILLY
(lashing out)
Nothing will happen! I make the rules as I go!! Cubs do what I say! Always have! Always will! I got Cathedral and I'll never let go!

 

LOGAN
No cubs over fifteen, Billy! Ever heard of a cub with a green flower? You'll leave Cathedral then, Billy, when you're on green, because they won't let a green stay here.
(slightest beat)
If you try to stay the young ones will gut-rip you apart!

 

BILLY
Shut up! Shut up your damn mouth!

Logan falls back into a fighting crouch... but before he can strike a blow... he is grabbed and slammed against the wall of an abandoned building.
[ANOTHER VOICE
Let him suck Muscle! That'll shut his mouth! Let's watch him shake himself to death!!
We see the Cubs take out drugpads. They squeeze the pads and inhale the "Muscle." At once their movements become blurringly rapid. They take menacing positions -- some leaping overhead.]
A VOICE
Give him some Muscle!!

Like lightning they change positions and flash around Logan and Jessica

CLOSE ON - JESSICA

Watching... terrified.

CLOSE ON - LOGAN

Being held against the wall by Cubs as:
[ANOTHER VOICE
Shake him to death!!
A VOICE
Kill him!

ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING BILLY

Moving a drugpad against Logan's face.

Logan is holding his breath... desperately trying not to breathe the "Muscle" directly from the pad into his system.
BILLY
(chilling laugh)
He's trying to hold his breath...

As Billy presses the pad tighter against Logan's face:]

With all his might, Logan wrenches his arms loose... drops to the ground and pulls out his gun.

He fires and fire girdles a pillar... and they start to back away.
BILLY
We can rush him... we can take can take him again, we can!!

The pack hesitates... stops backing away.
LOGAN
(moving the gun slowly back and forth)
All right! How many of you want this to be Lastday?! 
 
The pack moves back again... and disperses, leaving Billy facing Logan alone.
LOGAN
Come on, Billy... come on... you cut a Sandman, didn't you?!

Logan tucks the gun back into his waist.
LOGAN
Come on, Billy... cut me... Come on.

After a beat, Billy turns and runs away.
After they escape Doc at the New You, Jessica leads him into the Loveshop.  This scene exists in the final film and features a remarkable amount of nudity for PG-rated film.  Originally, however, it was supposed to show more.  William F. Nolan, one of the authors of the book was on set when it was filmed and had this to say:
"The biggest disappointment...was the near-total loss of the Love Shop sequence.  I was in Dallas as this was begin shot; it required four full working days, complete with erotic ballet movements, black lighting, fiery nude-body paints and incredible color effects set dressing.  It was meant to shock and arouse the senses and Saul David imported ballet master Stephen Wenta from Europe just to choreograph it.  Only a few muted fragments remain in the final print, but the blame is not MGM's.  Saul David fought bitterly to save the footage, but the powers that be, in charge of the ratings, refused to grant a GP [PG] to the film unless the sequence was removed."1
Unfortunately, the original footage appears to be lost.  There was a rumor that MGM Home video tried to find it for their laserdisc release in the 1990's, but failed to do so.
ARCADE TRACKING
Logan and Jessica running through Arcade.

LOGAN AND JESSICA

Suddenly she pulls him in another direction.
JESSICA
Follow me, Logan. Stay close.

As they run into Hallucimill... Francis... never too far behind... spots them and follows.

EXT. HALLUCIMILL - TWO SHOT - LOGAN AND JESSICA

Exiting from the other side... and running through the crowd toward and into a Love Shop... followed by Francis coming out of the Hallucimill, too... and running toward the Love Shop.

INT. LOVE SHOP - LOGAN AND JESSICA

As they enter the hot darkness. The Love Shop is throbbing with sexuality. In it, the darkness breaks at Irregular intervals -- when booths and cubicles flare into brilliance, each time revealing an orgiastic tableau. The Love Shop is multi-leveled and the random flashes may appear from any direction at any time, blinding and stunning the viewer. Logan and Jessica pause to get their bearings and as they do, a beautiful WANTON grabs Logan, pulling and laughing:
WANTON
I have an empty one, Sandman.

Logan tries to pull away, looks around for Jessica just in time to see a man almost carrying her off. Then the light is gone again and Jessica with it.

LOGAN AND THE WANTON

As she tears at his clothing, wrapping herself around him, trying to pull him down. Then, as the light flares again she suddenly lets go and grabs another man... Logan is, freed, starts looking for Jessica.

SERIES OF SHOTS

Logan hunting through the Love Shop, fighting them off.

INTERCUT SHOTS

Of the suddenly-illuminated tableaus. Sex, manifold and multiform -- everybody doing it.

ANOTHER ANGLE - FRANCIS

Entering, starting to look around -- grabbed by one of the laughing Wantons.

LOGAN & JESSICA

Brief glimpses of them looking for each other.

FRANCIS

Hunting both.

WITH LOGAN

As he suddenly collides with a woman -- shoves her away and sees it's Jessica. Now together they make for an archway where multiple mirrors enclose them.

Suddenly they are in darkness. Then a heavy door slides open and Jessica leads Logan through the opening. Behind them the door slides shut again.

FRANCIS

Desperately trying to get rid of a woman, sees a flash of Logan and Jessica far across the room -- sees them leave. Then he's pulled down again as the orgy continues.
The next deleted material take place as Logan and Jessica are trying to elude Francis under the city.  It's a minor point, but helps to explain a continuity error in the final film.  Logan and Jessica are moving quietly amongst the giant fish tanks several levels beneath Francis.  In the script Logan slips and falls into one of the tanks.  This was apparently changed to Jessica falling during shooting, presumably because she would look better wet.  It's not really a bad error as there is falling water and it could reasonably be assumed that she got wet from that.

E. Helping Jessica, Logan slips... falls into darkness. Jessica's fear until he emerges, hand over slimy hand. The water is cold.
And then we get to Box.  In one of the few points of action lifted reasonably whole from the book, the Box sequence was originally supposed to include a sequence where Box sculpts a nude Logan and Jessica in an embrace.  This can again be glimpsed in film's trailer, and was again removed to secure a PG rating.  Because this sequence was removed there is a jarring continuity jump where Box all of a sudden has different hands.  The script reads differently here.  The action was changed either in a later version of the script, or during filming.

These images show the continuity error in the released film.


These are stills from the deleted scenes.


LOGAN
You know about Sanctuary! I know you do! You have to help us! You don't have a choice! It isn't your decision!! Tell us.

 

BOX
Never a pair. I have never had a pair.

 

LOGAN
Where do you send them?

 

BOX
You're a beautiful pair.

 

JESSICA
Please.

 

BOX
I've never seen humans whom I thought worthy of being here...
(a beat)
I'd like to sculpt you.
(looking around)
Where would I put you?
(smiling)
I know... you'd be the base of the column. You'd hold up my world!

 

LOGAN
(exasperated)
Answer the question!

 

BOX
Do you know how long all this will last? Not thirty years... or thirty thousand years... but thirty thousand years... and you'll be part of it. Ages will roll... Ages. And you'll be here... the two of you... eternally frozen... frozen... beautiful.

 

LOGAN
(to Jessica)
There must be somebody else up here. I can't believe that he's --

 

BOX
(interrupting; his voice tone changing; very lucid)
Let me sculpt you and I will show you where the others have gone.

 

LOGAN
That's better.
(slightest beat)
How do you want us?

 

BOX
Nude. Imagine, a pair.

 

LOGAN
(starting to take off his clothes; as Jessica hesitates, Logan smiles)
It'll be all right...

 

JESSICA
Undresses.

Box motions to a pedestal covered with deep white furs.
BOX
Up there.

Logan helps Jessica up to the pedestal. As they stand there:
LOGAN
How do you want us?

BOX
(beat)
Up there.

Logan looks at Jessica. Her beauty is glowing in the lamplight.

Logan takes Jessica into his arms.

BOX
Enchanting. Is that what humans do?

By this time, Logan and Jessica are no longer listening to Box... their arms are enveloping one another... with strong feelings.
BOX'S VOICE
Superb!

ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING BOX

As his metal hand begins to BUZZ... he brings it to the base of the huge column supporting the cavern.

As he works furiously... at incredible speed:

LOGAN AND JESSICA

...oblivious to Box... their feelings intensifying as they continue to hold one another.

CLOSE - ON BOX
BOX
(stepping back)
Done... behold...!

REVERSE ANGLE - LOGAN AND JESSICA

Before they turn to view the sculpture they kiss long and passionately.

Their mood is broken by:
BOX'S VOICE
Done... Done... Done...

Logan and Jessica break. They turn and see:

FULL ANGLE - THE ICE SCULPTURE

Box has captured them perfectly... shimmering with life...filled with emotion.

WIDE ANGLE - INCLUDING LOGAN, JESSICA AND BOX

There are tears in Jessica's eyes as she reacts to the sculpture.
JESSICA
(squeezing Logan's 
hand)
It's glorious...

Logan helps Jessica off the pedestal and they both start to dress.

LOGAN
All right. Now you keep your bargain.

BOX
(rapt by his work)
Wait for the wind! Wait and hear the birds sing over you!

LOGAN
(only interested in getting out)
We're ready.

Box mumbles as he leads Logan and Jessica toward the rear of the Ice Cavern.

INT. ICE ROOM

As Box enters followed by Logan and Jessica.

This room has a fairly low ceiling and it is not too wide.

It stretches back as far as the eye can see.

The ice along the left wall is frosted... but the ice along the right wall is perfectly clear.

And embedded in the ice along the perfectly clear right wall are:

WIDE ANGLE - MEN AND WOMEN

Standing in erect positions.

At first it appears that they might be more of Box's perfect works of sculpture.

But as Logan and Jessica examine them closely through the clear ice... it is soon apparent that they are real people...who have been frozen.

CLOSE ON LOGAN AND JESSICA

Horrified as they move slowly along the wall.

ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING THE MEN AND WOMEN FROZEN IN THE WALL

We can see that each of them has a black crystal flower in the palm of their right hands.

Logan walks to the end of this wall. Each frozen body has a number above it. The final body's number is 1056... That number which the voice in Sandman's headquarters revealed as the number of missing Runners.

The CAMERA PANS Logan back to Box.

ANOTHER ANGLE - INCLUDING BOX

As Logan turns toward him.
LOGAN
(stupefied)
How did they get in here?

BOX
Regular storage procedure... the same as the other food... The other food stopped coming and they started.

LOGAN
What other food?

BOX
Fish and plankton, sea greens and protein from the sea.
(pointing to the frosted ice wall)
It's all here -- ready -- fresh as harvest day. Fish and plankton, sea greens and protein from the sea... And then it stopped coming and they...
(gesture)
...came instead. So I store them here. I'm ready. And you're ready. It's my Job -- protein, plankton, grass from the sea.

Logan pulls out his gun.
LOGAN
Tell us how to get out... or I'll destroy you... I'll kill you!

Box laughs... The same LOUD, ROARING LAUGH we HEARD earlier. Then:
BOX
(calmly)
Such a beautiful pair. I'll stand you facing one another.

Box starts his saw hand BUZZING. He turns all the flesh parts of his body away from Logan and starts advancing toward him and Jessica who is now standing behind Logan.

Box is now like an armed vehicle.

Logan FIRES... the fire reflecting harmlessly off Box's metal frame.
BOX
(advancing)
Resign yourself.

MEDIUM ANGLE - LOGAN AND JESSICA

Retreating... as Logan FIRES again and again... to no avail.

As Logan and Jessica retreat further and further toward the rear of this room and:

REVERSE ANGLE - BOX

Advancing We can SEE PERSON AFTER PERSON... embedded in the clear wall of ice. A strange mute audience to this to-the-death drama.

TWO SHOT - LOGAN AND JESSICA

Finally reaching the rear wall of this room as:

REVERSE ANGLE - BOX

Relentlessly moving toward them.

TWO SHOT - LOGAN AND JESSICA

Seemingly pinned back against the rear wall.

Logan is FIRING his gun futilely with his right hand... while moving his empty hand against the rear wall... trying to find a knob or button which might open it.

The entire time he never takes his eyes off:

REVERSE ANGLE - BOX

Getting closer. The saw is BUZZING LOUDLY.
BOX
(chilling tone)
I make such a small, quick incision... you can hardly feel it.

REVERSE ANGLE - LOGAN AND JESSICA

Against the rear wall... We can SEE... but they cannot... that above them... on the ceiling... there are a number of exposed cables.

FULL ANGLE - LOGAN, JESSICA AND BOX

Box is practically upon them. As he lunges forward with his WHIRRING saw hand Logan pushes Jessica to the floor and drops down alongside her.

Box cannot stop his forward thrust and cuts a sizable chunk of ice out of the rear wall as:

Logan SHOOTS at Box from the floor level... upwards... trying to penetrate some part of his seemingly impregnable body. He misses but hits the exposed cables on the ceiling.

There is an EXPLOSION.
BOX
(looking up; screaming)
No! The coils!

Box rushes past Logan and Jessica toward the huge ice cavern containing his sculptures.
BOX
(still screaming)
All my work!! All my work!!

As Logan and Jessica stand:

ANGLE - THE REFRIGERANT COILS

Bursting open, discharging great streams of gases.

LOGAN

Seeing the effect, shooting again and again at the ceiling and walls.

ANOTHER ANGLE

Coils bursting everywhere, vapor billowing into the cavern.

ANOTHER ANGLE

Huge slabs of ice instantly loosening, crashing over.

FULL SHOT

As the effect multiplies -- In the hissing vapor-sculptures crashing over and enormous chunks of ice loosened and crashing.

BOX

Careening around wildly in the growing ruin, as the lights dim and flicker out.

ANGLE

The ceiling full of birds loosening, crashing down upon Box. Again and again like great spears and wedges

BOX

Buried in his work, still feebly moving, then still as the roaring ice crashes down, in the terrible darkness.

LOGAN AND JESSICA

Cowering in the crashing maelstrom of ice blocks -- saved only by being in an angle of the cave.

FULL SHOT

The SCREEN blotted out by the cave-in, going out of focus. Silence. Then:

SOUND: Ice melting, water running.

LOGAN AND JESSICA

Stir in the dimness, amazed to be alive.

SOUND: A heavy crash and splash as another huge ice block falls into the water.

As it falls, the cave is suddenly illuminated again. They look and see the light is coming from a great fissure in the wall -- opened by the last ice fall. Water rains across the opening.

Logan and Jessica make their way to it, step out.

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